ZOLATE PATÂTNA (Appreciation of Poetry)

By Philip Thanglienmâng

Zo late chi tuomtuom a om hi. Khenkhat toumunla pawlkhat sannemla, zangtala, lalêh leh adgdg a om hi. La pâtâtna i chi chiengin la khat sunga agui kichiendan leh dawng khat ah thuteng bangza a om e? chi leh a okaidan,athutengte kizawitawndan chite i genna ahi.

Tualeh tua la dawngte sunga laphuotu in bang ahing hil nuom ahiei chite khuoltuona ahi. A thu a late sungah hindan, poudan, khosahdan, nopsahdan, gentheidan, dana, kana chite leh adgdgte a tomkim a genkhietna khu La pâtâtna kici ahi.

Tuinle; tam anei La pâtâtna genkhawm vai:

1. a.Khangvaimâng leh tuon a pupa tongciemna kângtui munzang hi e.

b.Zo Gunpi leh kângtui minthang Atua tung Zota kuolsung chi u’a.

Apâtâtna 1: Tami la ahileh gamngaila ahi. Pu. Mang Cin Khup MPpu in Zogam a tapna a phuo ahi. Nidanglai a i pu i pate leh Kawlmangte a na kithukimna uh gamgi a genna ahi. Zogam gamgi pen Chindween gunpi apat Loktak dil tan a china ahi. Agui masa sungah kamteng(syllable) 8(giet) a om a,agui nina ah kamteng 9(kuo) a om hi. Tami la pen Zangta la kai ahi.

Apâtâtna 2:

2. a. Tuizum Mângkâng kîl bang hing khang, Zota kuolsung zil bang lîng e, Pienna i gamlei aw phal si’ng e. b. Pienna gamlei leh i Zogam kuom , Lal ka naw sansi’n hing zêl e, Ngalliem vontawi ka lâulou lâi e.

Tami gamngai la ahi. Agui masa leh anina ah kamteng 8(giet) chiet a om hi. Agui thumna ah kamteng 9(kuo) a om hi. Mangkangte ahing khanlet lai u’a Zogam a pawtpuo mihing ahingmat sawm lai u’a kiphuo ahi. Zote’n a pienna gam uh a it mama zieh u’a mi khut sunga alutsah nuomlouna uh laphuo ahi. Zogal lai a, Mangkangte leh Zote huoisetah a a kidouna u’a shisan-naisan luonna akitapna ahi. Hangsantahin ngaltang hat ma bangin a Zogam uh hung u’a, tualeh sina mi tampite’n a tuoh u’a, nanleh Mangkangte a zau mawngmawng sih uhhi.

3. Zângkhen kawlchieng ka tawi minthang toh Sang ka kap lentukuom a zâl,

Sang ka kâp lentukuom a zâl, Na bângkim na’i cin leh tuoi Na bângkim na uoi?

Apatatna 3:Tami hanla ahi. Agui masa sungah thuteng 9(kuo) aum a,a gui nina sungah kamteng 8(giet) chiet a om hi. Agui thumna ah kamteng 7(sagi) atawpna gui ah thuteng guh a om hi. Tami la pen gamvahmi pasal khat in athau tawi toh sa khat atha aphuona ahi. A u-a naute’n atangkim na uoi chia aphuona ahi.

4.(a) I Senam Zolei nunnuom, Mi lênna’n ka phal lou e, Pu lênna; tuon Pupa lênna aw e.

(b) Pu lênna tuon Pupa lênna, Guol toh sang muol ka suona, Sih vâng e, phal thei sih vâng aw e. Apatatna: Tami gamngai la ahileh Senam khuo midangte’n a kisim lai a kiphuo ahi. Adawng khatna a, agui masa leh anina sungah kamteng(syllable) 7sagi chiet a om a, agui thumna ah kamteng 10(sawm) a om hi. Adawng nina a, a gui masapen ah kamteng 10(sawm) a om a,agui nina ah kamteng 7 sagi a om a, a gui thumna ah kamteng 9(kuo) a om hi.

5. a. Pâlpum minthang bânzâl suosiem Cîn minthang, toh hei lawm e.

b. Ka kotnawl a zuo lunggin aw, Buollou lâukha ngâi ing aw e.

Apatatna: Tami la tang-ai ahilouleh sa-ai,ton la ahi. Aphuotu in a u-pa lutung a tuhpal hoi mama asiet a et cienga etlawm a sah thu a phuona ahi. A kot kunglam a et cienga a pa shisa a lungsim a hing kilang,angai mama thu aphuona ahi.Agui masa sungah kamteng 8(giet) a om chiet a, agui nina ah, kamteng 7(sagi) a om hi. Agui tawpna ah kamteng 9(kuo) a om hi.

6.a. Tuoi minthang leh khomuol lumsuong, Hânzei tawina’n lawm sa’ng e.

b. Hanzei tawina’n lawm sa’ng e, Sanggiel pawl toh lawm sa’ng e.

Apatatna: Tami hanla ahia, atapa in kamei gielnei amat a tapna ahi. Khomuol lumsuong dawna mun a, hanla asahna thu ahi. Kamkei gielnei ahing puoh tung zou khomuol suongdaw tung kikou zen a ahatna hanla asah thu ahi.

7. a. Sâumang kânkong ka kalni’n zângni diel e, Vuisâi luong sing bang lum e.

b. Lunggin teng maciengsuon ta’ng e, Vuisâi thângmuol ah suo’ng e.

Apatatna: Tami hanla ahia, gamvahmi khat in saipi a thana la hi. Sabeng a kuon saipi lien mama khat a mat thu ahi. Inn a’ng tun hun in ni a tumta hi. A samat pen tuongphei lai ah a siel hi. A hieng a santeng toh a ai-khawm a a nekhawm hi. Agui masa ah kamteng 11(sawm leh khat) a om a, a gui nina ah, kamteng 7sagi a om hi.Adawng nina ah, a gui masapen ah kamteng 8 giet a om a, agui nina ah, kamteng 7sagi a om hi.

Dohnate: Tam anei a late patatna gieldoh in.

1. Sien toh houlung ka kum a ,

Agin gimnei ka zâh aw, Kidang sa’ng aw e,

Agin gimnei ka zâh aw,

Kâmmei kuongpi a’diei maw?

En ngamla’ng aw e.

2. Santuipi vûm bang khawl kâl,

Zatam cieului gâlkâi in, Suon heita aw e...... Miriam selungdam kisa’n,

Sî bang nûi in nunnuom, Lâmtuol saita aw e.

3. Keila piengpan, ‘Zînkol tângsa; sal bang suoh di’n;

Sien aw nang vâng mu bang ngâi vêng e!

Mu bang ka ngâi, tung Lûnmâng aw; Sênnâu bang ei pom aw Zuonêm aw!

4. Vân sînnuoi a miza piengteng ‘Zîn in kêlsiel bang ei del den e! Lûnmâng Jesu Sien vontawi in phammawna daw-âi tawi lawm aw e!

5. Tai bang tênna sietlei tunga ‘Zin-in kêlsiel bang ei del den e! Zîng ka zinna, Sietlei tuol khie’n; thangvân vângkhuo tuong ka tun dîng; Hâi bang ngâhla’ng e!